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请帮我修改这篇英文文章
When I first accepted the English class in the Junior High School,all I know about English was just how to read and write the ten numbers.
In the Junior High School I met the teacher who helped me step into the English world.She was absolutely a very strict woman.At that time,almost all the students,of course include me,hated the mid-aged woman,because she was too strict with me.Everyday we need to spend almost 3 hours on English homework.So,we had little time to do other homework,to do something we like to do,in that way,we had to sleep late,but get up early.We had to do the endless writing work and recite the boring words and texts!And nearly the teacher punishes everyday we had to face the fear of!At that time,we even planned to hit her after graduate from the Junior High School.But we can’t help but acknowledge that our English level is greater than other classes because of her teaching style.
When I entered the Senior High School,I can swear that I really pay little attention to English study,sometimes I didn't take the English book home for over a week!At that School I met another English teacher------A handsome man whose spoken English is so pretty good that when we talked with him,it seems like we were talking with a real foreigner.And he likes me very much,so nearly every class he will give me the chance to improve my spoken English.
To sum up,but for the exact teaching of my first teacher,I would not have the basic standard in English.On the other hand,thanks to my second English teacher,I have all the achievement in spoken English.
不好意思 我不是要翻译 而是要’’修改’’跟’’订正’’
看我要怎样写 才能更好
这篇文章的主题是 two teachers
请帮我修改这篇英文文章
When I first accepted the English class in the Junior High School,all I know about English was just how to read and write the ten numbers.
In the Junior High School I met the teacher who helped me step into the English world.She was absolutely a very strict woman.At that time,almost all the students,of course include me,hated the mid-aged woman,because she was too strict with me.Everyday we need to spend almost 3 hours on English homework.So,we had little time to do other homework,to do something we like to do,in that way,we had to sleep late,but get up early.We had to do the endless writing work and recite the boring words and texts!And nearly the teacher punishes everyday we had to face the fear of!At that time,we even planned to hit her after graduate from the Junior High School.But we can’t help but acknowledge that our English level is greater than other classes because of her teaching style.
When I entered the Senior High School,I can swear that I really pay little attention to English study,sometimes I didn't take the English book home for over a week!At that School I met another English teacher------A handsome man whose spoken English is so pretty good that when we talked with him,it seems like we were talking with a real foreigner.And he likes me very much,so nearly every class he will give me the chance to improve my spoken English.
To sum up,but for the exact teaching of my first teacher,I would not have the basic standard in English.On the other hand,thanks to my second English teacher,I have all the achievement in spoken English.
不好意思 我不是要翻译 而是要’’修改’’跟’’订正’’
看我要怎样写 才能更好
这篇文章的主题是 two teachers
When I first accepted the English class in the Junior High School,all I know about English was just how to read and write the ten numbers.
In the Junior High School I met the teacher who helped me step into the English world.She was absolutely a very strict woman.At that time,almost all the students,of course include me,hated the mid-aged woman,because she was too strict with me.Everyday we need to spend almost 3 hours on English homework.So,we had little time to do other homework,to do something we like to do,in that way,we had to sleep late,but get up early.We had to do the endless writing work and recite the boring words and texts!And nearly the teacher punishes everyday we had to face the fear of!At that time,we even planned to hit her after graduate from the Junior High School.But we can’t help but acknowledge that our English level is greater than other classes because of her teaching style.
When I entered the Senior High School,I can swear that I really pay little attention to English study,sometimes I didn't take the English book home for over a week!At that School I met another English teacher------A handsome man whose spoken English is so pretty good that when we talked with him,it seems like we were talking with a real foreigner.And he likes me very much,so nearly every class he will give me the chance to improve my spoken English.
To sum up,but for the exact teaching of my first teacher,I would not have the basic standard in English.On the other hand,thanks to my second English teacher,I have all the achievement in spoken English.
不好意思 我不是要翻译 而是要’’修改’’跟’’订正’’
看我要怎样写 才能更好
这篇文章的主题是 two teachers
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