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求【雅思大作文】的修改和打分
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Some people think theat parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others,however,believe that school is the place to learn this.
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In current societies,it is universally accept that social ability is playing an increasingly dominant role in children’s life.The issue of whether parents should shoulder the responsibility of establishing the talent of social or school should is of interest about many people.From the point of my view,I prefer school should do it.
School has the inner advance in establishing aptitude of society.On the one hand,school is a society minierture,a student be set in an environment like this which can improve whom more independently and confidently.It is hardly to do that under the parenting.On the other hand,to be a good member of society demand students solve the problems between peoples.However,as we all know,friendship is the cornerstone of the society,which needs putting people together,school can do this.
That is not to say it is impossible to cultivate the children to be good members of society that parenting education.Parents can impart the experiences from themselves,which are more vivid than that knowledge from books.The fact is that more often than not the experiences usually cannot to be practiced while after learning,because nobody counter-communicates with children.
As a conclusion,parenting absolutely not a unique way to teaching those children to be excelling members of society in the status quo.Thus,we should schooling and parenting goes hand in hand,not only schools or parents should do this,but also all of society as well.