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四级快到了!求帮忙修改一篇四级英语作文吧!感激不尽!这是我写的一篇四级英语作文,帮我找出其中写错的地方和表达不够地道或准
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四级快到了!求帮忙修改一篇四级英语作文吧!感激不尽!
这是我写的一篇四级英语作文,帮我找出其中写错的地方和表达不够地道或准确的地方,总之就是找出你不满意的地方就行了,然后再把你的写法写在下面给我参考就可以了!四级快到了!感激不尽!
Living alone or Living with roommates
Written by Zhao Lee
When asked about college students should live alone or live with roommates ,different students will have different preferences .Some students choose to live alone ,while others would rather live with roommates.
Those students who make the former choice believe living alone can make them enjoy more peace and quiet.Besides,they argue ,under such peaceful conditions ,they can focus their attention on their own study easily ,learning efficiently and gain more knowledge .However ,still other students choose to live with roommates.From their perspectives ,college career includes not only learning but also how to cope with other people .In addition ,they hold the point that living with roommates is convenient for them to make friends with each other .
As to me ,I am inclined to live with roommates since I am not good at fitting in with other peers and dorm life may benefit me .Furthermore ,I can get immediate help from students around me when I alone can not handle a matter .Given these factors ,I think I’d better live with roommates.
四级快到了!求帮忙修改一篇四级英语作文吧!感激不尽!
这是我写的一篇四级英语作文,帮我找出其中写错的地方和表达不够地道或准确的地方,总之就是找出你不满意的地方就行了,然后再把你的写法写在下面给我参考就可以了!四级快到了!感激不尽!
Living alone or Living with roommates
Written by Zhao Lee
When asked about college students should live alone or live with roommates ,different students will have different preferences .Some students choose to live alone ,while others would rather live with roommates.
Those students who make the former choice believe living alone can make them enjoy more peace and quiet.Besides,they argue ,under such peaceful conditions ,they can focus their attention on their own study easily ,learning efficiently and gain more knowledge .However ,still other students choose to live with roommates.From their perspectives ,college career includes not only learning but also how to cope with other people .In addition ,they hold the point that living with roommates is convenient for them to make friends with each other .
As to me ,I am inclined to live with roommates since I am not good at fitting in with other peers and dorm life may benefit me .Furthermore ,I can get immediate help from students around me when I alone can not handle a matter .Given these factors ,I think I’d better live with roommates.
这是我写的一篇四级英语作文,帮我找出其中写错的地方和表达不够地道或准确的地方,总之就是找出你不满意的地方就行了,然后再把你的写法写在下面给我参考就可以了!四级快到了!感激不尽!
Living alone or Living with roommates
Written by Zhao Lee
When asked about college students should live alone or live with roommates ,different students will have different preferences .Some students choose to live alone ,while others would rather live with roommates.
Those students who make the former choice believe living alone can make them enjoy more peace and quiet.Besides,they argue ,under such peaceful conditions ,they can focus their attention on their own study easily ,learning efficiently and gain more knowledge .However ,still other students choose to live with roommates.From their perspectives ,college career includes not only learning but also how to cope with other people .In addition ,they hold the point that living with roommates is convenient for them to make friends with each other .
As to me ,I am inclined to live with roommates since I am not good at fitting in with other peers and dorm life may benefit me .Furthermore ,I can get immediate help from students around me when I alone can not handle a matter .Given these factors ,I think I’d better live with roommates.
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