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有没有英语达人 看看文章有没有错小弟是个英语小白 因年少贪玩 连什麼式都搞不清楚 但我开始不想浪费时间 想学好英文 有个
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有没有英语达人 看看文章有没有错
小弟是个英语小白 因年少贪玩 连什麼式都搞不清楚 但我开始不想浪费时间 想学好英文 有个好的前途 就在刚才 我又查了字典 凑凑拼拼了一个文章
文章有什麼不流畅或用错词的地方吗?
long time ago,have one old man alone live in a one no man's island,He live there already have three years.And then why He live here?Because in there years ago,the old man and he wife by boat travel en route,sudden happened one unexpected ,the boat was ocean wave to hit broken.So he and his wife was scattered.
3 years on,He all along miss his family so much.But he don't have Leave the island method ,so his only can waiting and hope someone through this island,can help he leave here.
有没有英语达人 看看文章有没有错
小弟是个英语小白 因年少贪玩 连什麼式都搞不清楚 但我开始不想浪费时间 想学好英文 有个好的前途 就在刚才 我又查了字典 凑凑拼拼了一个文章
文章有什麼不流畅或用错词的地方吗?
long time ago,have one old man alone live in a one no man's island,He live there already have three years.And then why He live here?Because in there years ago,the old man and he wife by boat travel en route,sudden happened one unexpected ,the boat was ocean wave to hit broken.So he and his wife was scattered.
3 years on,He all along miss his family so much.But he don't have Leave the island method ,so his only can waiting and hope someone through this island,can help he leave here.
小弟是个英语小白 因年少贪玩 连什麼式都搞不清楚 但我开始不想浪费时间 想学好英文 有个好的前途 就在刚才 我又查了字典 凑凑拼拼了一个文章
文章有什麼不流畅或用错词的地方吗?
long time ago,have one old man alone live in a one no man's island,He live there already have three years.And then why He live here?Because in there years ago,the old man and he wife by boat travel en route,sudden happened one unexpected ,the boat was ocean wave to hit broken.So he and his wife was scattered.
3 years on,He all along miss his family so much.But he don't have Leave the island method ,so his only can waiting and hope someone through this island,can help he leave here.
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