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请帮忙修正我英语日记中的错误 ,非常感谢Dear ：For improving a writing skill , i
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请帮忙修正我英语日记中的错误 ,非常感谢
Dear ：
For improving a writing skill , i will to write a composition in every week.
If you feel free.Please help me to check the Composition .
Thanks for your help .
Best Regards.
Nov 23.2006 thursday light rain
Yesterday evering I have supper in a restauant which i often stayed in .The boss is from GuiZhou Province .he is a young man with a excellent aspect . when i came in his sight ,he smiled and asked me :"What do you want ? the beef is very fresh. I just choosed it in food market ". i said : "OK" . wait for a moment . he have cooked it and take it to my table and said: please enjoying .if you have any questions. please let me know .i will improved it . i said :" thank you .but it delicious".
this evering . i came in this restauant for supper again . he asked me ："the beef is really delicious? but your face is give away your heart .it's badly ,isn't it ? hehe". i smiled. he sayid:"yes,in fact ,your cooking skills is still need study. hehe", he said :yesterday I cooking food with a sorrow mood . when i have a good mood,my cooking is able to get better ".then i asked he a question ："Perhaps I go to your restaurant to have a meal ex- first essentials to ask whether you have a good mood or not ". his face was flushing and give me a unnatral smile. afterwards, he said :No, if you enjoy here . i will cooking more delicious foods&my mood will get better. ：)
请帮忙修正我英语日记中的错误 ,非常感谢
Dear ：
For improving a writing skill , i will to write a composition in every week.
If you feel free.Please help me to check the Composition .
Thanks for your help .
Best Regards.
Nov 23.2006 thursday light rain
Yesterday evering I have supper in a restauant which i often stayed in .The boss is from GuiZhou Province .he is a young man with a excellent aspect . when i came in his sight ,he smiled and asked me :"What do you want ? the beef is very fresh. I just choosed it in food market ". i said : "OK" . wait for a moment . he have cooked it and take it to my table and said: please enjoying .if you have any questions. please let me know .i will improved it . i said :" thank you .but it delicious".
this evering . i came in this restauant for supper again . he asked me ："the beef is really delicious? but your face is give away your heart .it's badly ,isn't it ? hehe". i smiled. he sayid:"yes,in fact ,your cooking skills is still need study. hehe", he said :yesterday I cooking food with a sorrow mood . when i have a good mood,my cooking is able to get better ".then i asked he a question ："Perhaps I go to your restaurant to have a meal ex- first essentials to ask whether you have a good mood or not ". his face was flushing and give me a unnatral smile. afterwards, he said :No, if you enjoy here . i will cooking more delicious foods&my mood will get better. ：)
Dear ：
For improving a writing skill , i will to write a composition in every week.
If you feel free.Please help me to check the Composition .
Thanks for your help .
Best Regards.
Nov 23.2006 thursday light rain
Yesterday evering I have supper in a restauant which i often stayed in .The boss is from GuiZhou Province .he is a young man with a excellent aspect . when i came in his sight ,he smiled and asked me :"What do you want ? the beef is very fresh. I just choosed it in food market ". i said : "OK" . wait for a moment . he have cooked it and take it to my table and said: please enjoying .if you have any questions. please let me know .i will improved it . i said :" thank you .but it delicious".
this evering . i came in this restauant for supper again . he asked me ："the beef is really delicious? but your face is give away your heart .it's badly ,isn't it ? hehe". i smiled. he sayid:"yes,in fact ,your cooking skills is still need study. hehe", he said :yesterday I cooking food with a sorrow mood . when i have a good mood,my cooking is able to get better ".then i asked he a question ："Perhaps I go to your restaurant to have a meal ex- first essentials to ask whether you have a good mood or not ". his face was flushing and give me a unnatral smile. afterwards, he said :No, if you enjoy here . i will cooking more delicious foods&my mood will get better. ：)
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