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高中英语短文改错,共有十处错误,求高人详解!
Each of us has a strong desire to succeed. The desire is great than that of others. In fact, everyone wants to be successful, so very few are willing to pay the price of hard working. Success is an attitude and has no really secrets. It all start with your belief system. Your belief system starts with what you feel about yourself. You must at first believe in yourself. On your journey to success, you will find that there are no shortcuts . You will never able to completely master every detail of your life. Attemmping to do so will only lead to disappointment. Besides, it's necessary of you to have clear goals. You'd better put your goals on the paper where they are visible so that they can help to moniter your progress.

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更正在括号处标出,总共十处错误!Each of us has a strong desire to succeed.The desire is (greater) than that of others.In fact,everyone wants to be successful,(but) very few are willing to pay the price ...