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英语作文修改,Susan was a pupil of the school of the air.It took he
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Susan was a pupil of the school of the air.It took her five mintues to walk across her farm to get school.The school days lasted from 8:45 to 12:00.The number of 12 pupil inthe school.The school had some advantages.There was few pupils in class.She cuold use the telephone and internet to communicate with her teacher.She also spent lots of time outside in nature and with animals.There was no traffic and no noise.Certainly it had some disadvantages.Susan did not have many fruends.She could not study lots of subjects.She only talked to the teacher once a week.It was difficult to understand everthing.There were few activities after school.Sometimes she played football on the farm,help out at home and reading.优质解答
1.The number of 12 pupil inthe school.改为：There were 12 pupils in the school.3.fruends改为：friends3.help out at home and reading.改为：helped out at home and read by herself.
Susan was a pupil of the school of the air.It took her five mintues to walk across her farm to get school.The school days lasted from 8:45 to 12:00.The number of 12 pupil inthe school.The school had some advantages.There was few pupils in class.She cuold use the telephone and internet to communicate with her teacher.She also spent lots of time outside in nature and with animals.There was no traffic and no noise.Certainly it had some disadvantages.Susan did not have many fruends.She could not study lots of subjects.She only talked to the teacher once a week.It was difficult to understand everthing.There were few activities after school.Sometimes she played football on the farm,help out at home and reading.
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