题目内容：

帮忙看一下这一篇英语演讲稿
主要是讲感谢母亲的,一分钟
Hello!Pleased tosee you all here.I will give a talk about thanksgiving then.Students,do youknow where do we come from?Our mothers give us lives!It means that our mothers’blood is flowing in our bodies now.So,I think everybody who even a leader
should say thanks to their mothers.Mothers let us enjoy our childhood.They
feed us to eat,send us to school for studying and protect us everywhere.They
also help us after we become adults.At that time,they ring us up often
because they want to know more about how we live.Although we go away from
them,we should take more care of them.A song says that wherever you are,you
cannot forget your mother.My mother is the most beautiful women I ever saw.
Let us love them forever.Thank you!
Hello!Pleased to
see you all here.I will give a talk about thanksgiving then.Students,do you
know where do we come from?Our mothers give us lives!It means that our mothers’
blood is flowing in our bodies now.So,I think everybody who even a leader
should say thanks to their mothers.Mothers let us enjoy our childhood.They
feed us to eat,send us to school for studying and protect us everywhere.They
also help us after we become adults.At that time,they ring us up often
because they want to know more about how we live.Although we go away from
them,we should take more care of them.A song says that wherever you are,you
cannot forget your mother.My mother is the most beautiful women I ever saw.Let us love them forever.Thank you!

优质解答

把没有信息量的句子删掉,远远超过一分钟.
演讲：speech,一般不用talk;
students做称呼听起来别扭.everybody, 或 dear classmates 要自然些.