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Music for our life,it is a drug to create text,is also awaken the elixir of the soul.Accompanied by the music,it will never be lonely.In the sea of music,we are well drifting boat,comfortable and peaceful.Only music can let us quiet erratic soul,settle.Every kind of music,classical music,religious music,pop music,heavy metal music,rock music,electronic music,jazz,basket,can give us is not the same as it props up a stretch of the sky.Let's relax,let us free,let's fly.I like music,whenever I'm tired,every time I good vibes,it is to share with my partner.It can persuade me to calm,also can shock I rose up in the depression.The magic of music have a kind of never disappear.For me,it is warm,is to save,is a passion,is the hope.I am glad,although not understand music,but enjoy the happiness of the gift of it.Joy and pain of heart,in music,and all is lost.Once again,with music put yourself into notes ups and downs.

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Music,like vitamin to our life,is the soul elixir.One will never be lonely when accompanied by music.Boating in the lake of music we may find comfort and peace because it calms our erratic souls down....