题目内容：

这句英文有错吗?请帮分析
在中国的投资活动一定能成为沟通世界各国和地区的企业家与中国市场的一座桥梁,促进中国和世界经济共同发展,共同繁荣
Trade in china will must become a connection bridge between chinese market and businessmen who come from every part of the world,which it will can be good for economic development and wealth of china and the world
英文有错吗?就这段英文指出,最好别另外翻译!