题目内容：

关于thesis statement 的
说shopping 在中国很盛行.
there are three main reasons why shopping is popular in China,China's economy is developing,people want to find a good way to relax and more shopping malls are builted recently years.
怎么修改才可以简洁些呢?还有语法错误有哪些呢?
一篇题目为：为什么购物在中国越来越盛行 的文章。thesis statement 怎么写呢？我说的三个原因可以简洁些吗？貌似不能用句子，语法错误了。