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高三英语作文求批改,指导第一次月考写了这篇作文求有经验的老师们网友们给给意见帮忙批改下.主题是高中生放弃高考去外国留学正
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高三英语作文求批改,指导
第一次月考写了这篇作文求有经验的老师们网友们给给意见帮忙批改下.主题是高中生放弃高考去外国留学正反方+自己意见的.作文要求是：1.写信目的2.介绍正反方意见3.自己的观点.其他都没给,希望大家帮我改改指明今后该怎么写好.我是浙江省的.
I am writing to imform you of the result of the discussion of whether students should give up high school extrance examination to study abroad.
60% students are opposite to it,the reason of which is that it is not approriate to go abroad at such a young age.Plus,going abroad means a brand new life,which will surely add to their difficulties.Nevertheless,as far as the rest are concerned,with the knowledge playing an increasingly important role,students should grassip the valuable opportunities to enrich their knowledge.
Personally I agree with the majority.Students going abroad benefit a lot.Besides comprehensive knowledge ,their overall ablilities get improved.It is overall ablilities that count in the present society.
郁闷笔误了应该是百分之40反对谢谢大家了以后尽量简洁
高三英语作文求批改,指导
第一次月考写了这篇作文求有经验的老师们网友们给给意见帮忙批改下.主题是高中生放弃高考去外国留学正反方+自己意见的.作文要求是：1.写信目的2.介绍正反方意见3.自己的观点.其他都没给,希望大家帮我改改指明今后该怎么写好.我是浙江省的.
I am writing to imform you of the result of the discussion of whether students should give up high school extrance examination to study abroad.
60% students are opposite to it,the reason of which is that it is not approriate to go abroad at such a young age.Plus,going abroad means a brand new life,which will surely add to their difficulties.Nevertheless,as far as the rest are concerned,with the knowledge playing an increasingly important role,students should grassip the valuable opportunities to enrich their knowledge.
Personally I agree with the majority.Students going abroad benefit a lot.Besides comprehensive knowledge ,their overall ablilities get improved.It is overall ablilities that count in the present society.
郁闷笔误了应该是百分之40反对谢谢大家了以后尽量简洁
第一次月考写了这篇作文求有经验的老师们网友们给给意见帮忙批改下.主题是高中生放弃高考去外国留学正反方+自己意见的.作文要求是：1.写信目的2.介绍正反方意见3.自己的观点.其他都没给,希望大家帮我改改指明今后该怎么写好.我是浙江省的.
I am writing to imform you of the result of the discussion of whether students should give up high school extrance examination to study abroad.
60% students are opposite to it,the reason of which is that it is not approriate to go abroad at such a young age.Plus,going abroad means a brand new life,which will surely add to their difficulties.Nevertheless,as far as the rest are concerned,with the knowledge playing an increasingly important role,students should grassip the valuable opportunities to enrich their knowledge.
Personally I agree with the majority.Students going abroad benefit a lot.Besides comprehensive knowledge ,their overall ablilities get improved.It is overall ablilities that count in the present society.
郁闷笔误了应该是百分之40反对谢谢大家了以后尽量简洁
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