题目内容：

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Young people have different attitude towards music．As we all known，most people throughout the world love music．Anyway，nowadays young people have begun to show enthusiasm for pop stars．

Many young people have a greatly passion for different kinds of pop music．They buy CDs and to download songs from the Internet．They enjoy the excitement pop music bring，and try to convey their own ideas in pop music．

As far as I concerned，we cannot deny that pop music is an essential part of our life．However，follow pop music blind should be discouraged．That we should do is to take a more critical attitude towards the pursuit of pop music．