题目内容：

帮我看下这篇英语短文写的对不对
During the war,the price of oil was soaring.I go to school by car every day,so my family has to spend more money for the car.And the soaring prices of the oil also cause all the price of commodity mark up.Because the entire commodity need transportation,if the price of the oil was soaring that the cost of the transportation will be increase in price too.So all the price of commodity was soaring.And that cause people didn’t buy a lot of thing,because they were expensive,and this may cause 通货膨胀.Because of 通货膨胀,people’s salary become lower and lower and some of them may lose their job,some company closed down.And at that time,my family was a little bit short of money; because the entire commodity was expensive then my life is uncomfortable.Unlike before .
But there’s still have something good happened.Because of the soaring precise of the oil,there wasn’t a lot of car.And the environment became better and better.The pollution became smaller and smaller,there wasn’t that much CO2,(the global warming may won’t be that serious*this is my own opinion,maybe this is wrong *)
通货膨胀啥的= = 用英语不会写