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More care for others
An old saying：“have a man like a candle,as in a limited life made a sub-heat,send a light,gives a warm,giving people light.” In our life,you can find love everywhere.If a people broke his or her leg,other students will help him.Without help ,we can’t live happily and healthily.And how can we show more care for others?
In my opinion,we should help others for their subjects.In my class,some students are poor at English,and two English teacher's assistant help them carefully.This is one of how to show more care for others.If some students are injured,we should help him,we also should tell the teachers.
Not only we show more care for other people,but also take good care of animals.Nowadays many people killed animals,so a lot of animals died.If we not stop doing this,human will died,too.We should give animals a safe place to take care of them.
Generally speaking,we should show more care for others,because we also need others’ help.We should help each others.Only by doing this,our life can be more beautiful.
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请帮个忙,帮这篇文章润润色,
More care for others
An old saying：“have a man like a candle,as in a limited life made a sub-heat,send a light,gives a warm,giving people light.” In our life,you can find love everywhere.If a people broke his or her leg,other students will help him.Without help ,we can’t live happily and healthily.And how can we show more care for others?
In my opinion,we should help others for their subjects.In my class,some students are poor at English,and two English teacher's assistant help them carefully.This is one of how to show more care for others.If some students are injured,we should help him,we also should tell the teachers.
Not only we show more care for other people,but also take good care of animals.Nowadays many people killed animals,so a lot of animals died.If we not stop doing this,human will died,too.We should give animals a safe place to take care of them.
Generally speaking,we should show more care for others,because we also need others’ help.We should help each others.Only by doing this,our life can be more beautiful.
三克油卖来卖去
More care for others
An old saying：“have a man like a candle,as in a limited life made a sub-heat,send a light,gives a warm,giving people light.” In our life,you can find love everywhere.If a people broke his or her leg,other students will help him.Without help ,we can’t live happily and healthily.And how can we show more care for others?
In my opinion,we should help others for their subjects.In my class,some students are poor at English,and two English teacher's assistant help them carefully.This is one of how to show more care for others.If some students are injured,we should help him,we also should tell the teachers.
Not only we show more care for other people,but also take good care of animals.Nowadays many people killed animals,so a lot of animals died.If we not stop doing this,human will died,too.We should give animals a safe place to take care of them.
Generally speaking,we should show more care for others,because we also need others’ help.We should help each others.Only by doing this,our life can be more beautiful.
三克油卖来卖去
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