题目内容：

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When 1 first learn to write in English, I ran into many difficulties. The main problem was that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything which I came across into my own language while I was reading. My teacher advised me to keep a diary. I followed his advices and put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself as I was learning to express myself with simple English. One day I wrote a story and I showed it to my teacher. It was an interested one which he liked it very much and he read it to the class. All said that the story sounded wonderfully. Their words were a great encouragement to me. What pleasant experience it was!