题目内容：

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修 改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起〉不计分。

I have many hobbies, among that fishing ranks first. It is fishing that have helped me improve my self-control.

Three years ago my academic performance is not satisfactory for my lack of patience. Then my father came up a good idea and taught me to fish. Having been told that fishing was full of funs, I followed him without hesitation. To his surprise, fishing turned out to be more difficult than I had expected it. I didn't remember how many times I had failed before I caught a fish. Amazing, the patience I developed by learning to fish has a influence on my study. Now I'd like to share my experience with those who have the same trouble, encouraged them to study with full devotion and attention.