题目内容：

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Jim，

I'm very glad to hear from you.In your letter，you said you suffer from depression because of the heavy load of study and didn’t know what to get rid of it.Therefore，I am writing to offer you some suggestion.

First of all，it is quite common of high school students to feel depressed sometimes.What really matters is you should face your problem and make up your mind to settle it.The most effectively way is to turn to your teachers for help.He will surely provide you with a useful and practical advice.Besides，take an active part in sports or you’ll feel more energetic than before.Hang out with friends is also a good way to relax yourself.

I hope my suggestions can be of some help to you.

Yours，

Li Hua