题目内容：

假定英语课上，老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

Dear Mr． Hu，

I' m glad to hear that the English newspaper is to be starting in our school． Now I'd like to give you some tip． Personally， I hold the view that the newspaper should colorful， including materials connected to our lessons． For example， the newspaper can regular provide different articles on western culture and customs， as will help us know more about the outside world． In addition， it would be better to set a special column（专栏） which we can express your feelings． We really need such a place to release our pressure and practice express ourselves in English． I truly hope that you can follow in my advice．

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua