题目内容：

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有十处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限1词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Steven,

From your letter, I know it is hard for you to make friends. The following advice may be for some help to you.

To begin with, walking to your classmates and talk with them. After several talk you will happy find that they ate likely to consider you as a warm-heart person. Gradually, you will enjoy each other company. Besides, you’d better to give them a hand when they are in trouble. It is advisable to participate in different kind of activities, which you can communicate with different people.

All in al if you follow my advice above, you would find that it isn’t big deal to make some friends.

Yours,

Jack