题目内容：

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Nowadays some freshman are applying to delay their schooling for one year. They want to make a best use of the time to find jobs. On the one hand, through practice they will get to know the society worse, which will certainly help them studied with a clear aim. On the other hand, it is easier for us to find jobs after graduation because of the experience. What they do really helped them make up for the disadvantage that they lack of social experience. It is in this way which they are quite sure how to meet the society’s need. As senior students, we should take part some practically activities besides learning in school.