题目内容：

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。

Watching one of the flag-raising ceremony in the capital left me a deep impression. On the morning of January 1, 2018，my parents and I go to the Tian’anmen Square. When they got there, a lot of people were already waiting. See the soldiers walking in sight, all of us felt exciting. Pacing in order, and the soldiers came to the stand. Then the mostly exciting moment came. The flag rose little by little with the familiar music, and we sang by it. The flag reached the top the moment the music came to end. Just then, cheers burst out from the crowds, what made me proud of our motherland.