题目内容：

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一条横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

Dear Jim,

I am glad to tell you something about the interesting Chinese naming practice.

Like the tradition in America, the family name in China is put first, be followed by the given name, Chinese people often named a baby with their best wish for good health and happiness. Some even go crazily about the names indicating the weather or the natural phenomenon at time of a baby's birth. When combined characters into a name, parents need to consider what it sounds. As for your Chinese name, how about "Ji Xiang"? The first character has a pronunciation similar

with that of your name Jim, and all of the characters mean “good luck”. I hope you'll love this Chinese name.

Yours

Li hua