题目内容：

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文　中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Lucy,

Thanks for your letter. I’d like to telling you about my first surfing online

experience.

This summer vacation when the computer was connected with the Internet,

my parents and I sat in the front of the monitor together. My father asked me

download some stock software, which could enable him to buy and sell shares

online without going outside. My mother loved Korean soap operas, so I

downloaded some for her but also told her how she could watch them online. At the

end, I searched for some English study website to help improve my listening and

speaking English. The Internet has allowed him family to enjoy a more convenient,

relaxed and efficient life.

How about your Internet experiences? I look forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li hua